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Final script

EXT. OUTSIDE
- SOPHIE IS WALKING BACK FROM SCHOOL DOWN A ROAD.

A CU shot of her face listening to her earphones. We hear the song playing. we have sounds of the wind and her breathing.
As we watch her walking we see a stranger following her in the background, standing on a stone path his footsteps make a noise and Sophie hears it ( her breath heavy with panic).

sounds stops.

BLACKOUT - A long held note creates a gloomy feel.




INT - A COMPUTER SCREEN.

We see an instant message conversation between Sophie and a Man.

We hear the sound of the computer key board.

*
(flash change) cuts to -
Sophies phone *ringing* "MrstrongCalling..."

(flash change) to -

EXT - BUS STOP.

Sophie is sat on a bus stop bench, and man's figure is brought into shot.

CUTS TO -

Two cups clunking together in "cheers"

Sophie

You think you know someone, but you learn to realise nothings simple anymore. Things are not what they seem.
CUTS TO -

sophie drinking out of her cup, the mans hand strokes her hair off her face. She smiles.

Sophie

...and i learnt the hard way. My fairy tale had turned into a horror.


(FLASH CHANGE) CUTS TO -


draw opens, inside is a rope, duct tape, sicssors and a needle/pills.


Music heavy (gloomy.)


BLACKOUT - We hear screaming, breaking glass objects, struggle, heavy breathing.


*
(FLASH CHANGE) TO -


INT - INSIDE A HOUSE


Sophie is running into a room before shutting the door behind her, she looks scared. Sophie locks the door and runs to the other side of the room.


WE HEAR THE DOOR KNOCKING AND THE DOOR KNOB MOVING. (the man is trying to get her)


Sophie see's a wardrobe and runs into it, She hides inside and the man breaks the door and looks round the room for her.


WE HEAR HEAVY BREATHING FROM HER AND HIM AND WE HEAR HIS FOOTSTEPS.


EXT - TRAIN STATION


We see Sophie sat on a bench at the train station. A train passes. We see Sophie looking around. We spot a unusual character on the other platform, when train passes he disappears.


BLACKOUT - PHONE RINGS*

Sophie (v.o)

hello?

MUSIC BEGINS




CREDITS.




THE END





A brief synopsis on 'ONLINE':


Online is about a 14 year old girl who is just making her way through school and her young teenage years. However she begins to talk to an online stranger whom she met on an online chatting site. She begins talking to him for a long time before things start becoming a bit unusual and he starts to say things that scare Sophie. She agrees to meet him not thinking and her worst nightmare begins for he is actually a psyco child killer who has many mental problems. He likes to torture and scare girls once he befriends them then eventually kills them. Sophie has to think hard and fast about escaping when she eventually gets trapped inside his house. The question is will she get out or is this the end of her.






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